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On Tuesday, the day after our Labor Day holiday, my students reported a mysterious guest in our classroom. I’m not exactly sure where I was during her visit (???), but here are a few reports of her profile:
Her name was Miss Crazy. she was Cruella DiVille like. She was weird and unmatching. She had a screachy voice. She was unpleasant. She had a stiff windmill. She had a red, feathery scarf and big, blue, starry glasses. She wore a crown. Wyatt
She had a red feathery scarf. It was very unpleasant. She had a shiny tiara. She had big, blue, scary sunglasses and a screachy voice. Also she was very unmatching and had a stiff windmill. She was very creepy, freaky, scary, weird, crazy, unpleasant…whatever you want to call it. But most of all, she looked like Cruella DiVille. She needs to go to jail. Reagan
Mrs. McCullers! Mrs. McCullers! Someone got in the classroom while you were gone! She looked like Cruella DiVille. She had a shiny tiara and a screachy voice. She is weird, freaky, and scary. She has big, blue glasses. Jennifer
We had a visitor. She was a robber. She had on a red, feathery scarf, a sparkle crown, and big, blue, starry glasses. She needs to go to jail. Jacob
Today we had a fairy come in our room. She had a bright-red fluffy scarf, a sparkly silver tiara, and a stiff windmill. THen she left right before Mrs. McCullers came in to the room. Nick
You’ve got to help us! From our descriptions, can you see a picture of this visitor?
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I liked the stories my friends did. They were very funny.
Comment byShe was actually very nice. I really liked her.
Comment byThere was an old lady in our classroom. I’m glad I wasn’t in there to see her.
Comment byThe Tinkle Fairy came to our classroom. She had a stiff windmill, a crown, and a red scarf. And then she “poofed” away!
Comment byI saw it. She had a red furry scarf and a tiara. She had star blue shiny glasses on her face. I think it was Mrs. McCullers. I recognize her voice, and I recognize her hair and stuff. It was kind of creepy.
Comment byHmmmm, I wasn’t there to meet this mysterious guest but I don’t think it was Mrs. McCullers. Why did the mystery guest visit your class? What did she talk about? Maybe she will vist my school soon too!
Comment byShe was very creepy. She had a very weird voice.
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