Who was that?
Wednesday September 05th 2007, 4:03 pm
Filed under: Writing




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On Tuesday, the day after our Labor Day holiday, my students reported a mysterious guest in our classroom. I’m not exactly sure where I was during her visit (???), but here are a few reports of her profile:

Her name was Miss Crazy. she was Cruella DiVille like. She was weird and unmatching. She had a screachy voice. She was unpleasant. She had a stiff windmill. She had a red, feathery scarf and big, blue, starry glasses. She wore a crown. Wyatt

She had a red feathery scarf. It was very unpleasant. She had a shiny tiara. She had big, blue, scary sunglasses and a screachy voice. Also she was very unmatching and had a stiff windmill. She was very creepy, freaky, scary, weird, crazy, unpleasant…whatever you want to call it. But most of all, she looked like Cruella DiVille. She needs to go to jail. Reagan

Mrs. McCullers! Mrs. McCullers! Someone got in the classroom while you were gone! She looked like Cruella DiVille. She had a shiny tiara and a screachy voice. She is weird, freaky, and scary. She has big, blue glasses. Jennifer

We had a visitor. She was a robber. She had on a red, feathery scarf, a sparkle crown, and big, blue, starry glasses. She needs to go to jail. Jacob

Today we had a fairy come in our room. She had a bright-red fluffy scarf, a sparkly silver tiara, and a stiff windmill. THen she left right before Mrs. McCullers came in to the room. Nick

You’ve got to help us! From our descriptions, can you see a picture of this visitor?





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7 Comments so far

I liked the stories my friends did. They were very funny.

Comment by    Chase 09.06.07 @ 10:07 am

She was actually very nice. I really liked her.

Comment by    Jacob 09.06.07 @ 10:19 am

There was an old lady in our classroom. I’m glad I wasn’t in there to see her.

Comment by    James 09.06.07 @ 10:22 am

The Tinkle Fairy came to our classroom. She had a stiff windmill, a crown, and a red scarf. And then she “poofed” away!

Comment by    Ian 09.06.07 @ 10:24 am

I saw it. She had a red furry scarf and a tiara. She had star blue shiny glasses on her face. I think it was Mrs. McCullers. I recognize her voice, and I recognize her hair and stuff. It was kind of creepy.

Comment by    Finn 09.08.07 @ 10:36 am

Hmmmm, I wasn’t there to meet this mysterious guest but I don’t think it was Mrs. McCullers. Why did the mystery guest visit your class? What did she talk about? Maybe she will vist my school soon too!

Comment by    Mrs. Meeler 09.14.07 @ 9:45 am

She was very creepy. She had a very weird voice.

Comment by    Finn 03.30.08 @ 11:16 am



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